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“There are no definitive statistics on tattoo removal, but Catherine A. Kniker, a senior vice president for laser manufacturer Candela, calculated that Americans may have 100,000 laser tattoo removal treatments this year,” Stated an article by Natasha Singer, writer for The New York Times. Thousands of Americans are beginning to consider tattoos as a way to improve their body image; several of them never consider the real meaning of their tattoos. With famous superstars and rap artists turning tattoo art mainstream, people with no doubt have began to consider tattoos as a way to enhance the image they want to give out about themselves. Americans should not get tattoos to improve their body image; doing so would make people face various tattoo stigmas that could have an effect on their social and economical status and without mentioning the possibility of emotional distress. Also, in consequence that the tattoo has little or no meaning to the person, they would eventually get bored of
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and be forced to consider laser removal processes. Another reason to take into consideration is the standard of body image, like fashion, is it constantly changing and may greatly affect the way one might feel about ones tattoo over time.
“There are no definitive statistics on tattoo removal, but Catherine A. Kniker, a senior vice president for laser manufacturer Candela, calculated that Americans may have 100,000 laser tattoo removal treatments this year,” Stated an article by Natasha Singer, writer for The New York Times. Thousands of Americans are beginning to consider tattoos as a way to improve their body image; several of them never consider the real meaning of their tattoos. With famous superstars and rap artists turning tattoo art mainstream, people with no doubt have began to consider tattoos as a way to enhance the image they want to give out about themselves. Americans should not get tattoos to improve their body image; doing so would make people face various tattoo stigmas that could have an effect on their social and economical status and without mentioning the possibility of emotional distress. Also, in consequence that the tattoo has little or no meaning to the person, they would eventually get bored of
continue:
and be forced to consider laser removal processes. Another reason to take into consideration is the standard of body image, like fashion, is it constantly changing and may greatly affect the way one might feel about ones tattoo over time.
Topic Sentence 1
Getting a tattoo to improve ones image will not only provoke co-workers and family to look at one from a different perspective but will also create a stereotype that might not be suitable for the lifestyle or work atmosphere one carries.
Topic Sentence 2
When people get a tattoo without a meaning it usually turns out to be for the sole purpose of enhancing their body image; a typical mistake they later might regret.
Topic Sentence 3
The perception of good body image constantly changes over the years and might effect the way society views your tattoo and what it reflects about you.
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